Hi Gang, Thank you for the updated version. Please find my additional comments below: Paper: page 3: =E2=80=A6 a weak energy dependency above 19.6 GeV. =46rom 19.6 to 7.7 GeV, (gammaOS =E2=88=92 gammaSS) tends to diminish, which is more prominent in peripheral collisions, though the statisti- cal errors are large for 7.7 GeV. This may be explained by the probable domination of hadronic interactions over partonic ones in peripheral collisions at low energies. The decreasing trend is not visible between 19.6 and 11.5 GeV. Also 19.6 - 27 GeV seems showing the decreasing trend for all three centrality bins. We would be careful about the discussion in the text. Analysis note: 2.5 efficiency, "The efficiency for 62.4 GeV Au+Au (run4) was interpolated from the known efficiency for 200 GeV (run4)." I would be good to add more details on the interpolation. (relevant figs and procedures.) With these addressed, I sign off. thanks, Shusu ========================================================================== Hi, Shusu Thanks for further comments! In the middle and lower panels of Fig 3, the 19 GeV points do look like the highest points among all energies, though we can say 11.5 GeV points may be somewhat consistent with 19.6 GeV within the errors. For each centrality, 11.5 GeV is lower than 19.6 GeV. So there's a systematic trend. I hope the future GPC and collaboration review will settle it down on how to describe these data points. For the technical note, we've added the following explanation: The tracking efficiency for run4 200 GeV was obtained from embedding data by previous STAR collaborators for PID analyses. Assuming for the same year the detector condition and the tracking algorithm are not significantly changed, the tracking efficiency will be a function of occupancy. Thus we can interpolate the efficiency according to the multiplicity from 200 GeV to 62.4 GeV. Thanks Gang