This page is to summarize the feedback, which was given by the internal STAR Review Committee to the pp-pA forward upgrade proposal.

Chair: Scott Wissink
The committee members:

Joern Putschke, Bill Llope, Declan Keane, Ken Barish, Saskia Mioduszewski, Jiangyong Jia, Anju Bhasin, Bernd Surrow, Yi Wang

Ex-Off: Ernst and Flemming
Charge to the Committee:  www.dropbox.com/s/so8olqes6jokb0q/Charge.to.the.Committee.pdf

The forward upgrade proposal from February 2017: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/starnotes/public/sn0648

To make the review easier here are a word and pdf file in 1 column format and line numbers
word: www.dropbox.com/s/hgpvdaa0qzmfu8h/ForwardUpgrade.v6.docx
pdf-file: www.dropbox.com/s/y4p4k187516a2zr/ForwardUpgrade.v6.pdf

Feedback from the committee chapter by chapter

Chapter 2:

• Saskia: 
  • www.dropbox.com/s/5uroekggw9oez19/saskia.chapter2.pdf
  • www.dropbox.com/s/nr157ca8ln8rexr/ForwardUpgrade.v6_SM_rev1.docx
• Scott: 
  • www.dropbox.com/s/aam3v26ovcfr11i/FUP%20comments%20Section%202%20-%20SWW.docx
• Bill:
  • www.dropbox.com/s/9gm0ghptqt4l623/Bill.Llope.chapter2.pdf
  • www.dropbox.com/s/zyjvwsq5f772670/ForwardUpgrade.v6_WJL.docx
• Declan:
  • www.dropbox.com/s/hh3ny4a0oikbnhk/Declan.chap2.Typos-etc.pdf
  • www.dropbox.com/s/jk8fuevzxgj3wcm/Declan.chap2.pdf

Chapter 3:

• Declan: 
  • www.dropbox.com/s/1q8jbmfeg7p6ne7/Declan.chapter3.pdf
• Scott:
  • www.dropbox.com/s/1a8btb9rhl802mv/FUP-SWWcomments-Sect3.docx

Chapter 4 and 5:

• Bernd S.:
  • www.dropbox.com/s/jq6ea4valo8g46d/Chapter4%265.B.Surrow.pdf
• Scott:
  •  www.dropbox.com/s/gyyy3ff1smo5pw2/FUP-SWWcomments-Sect4-5.docx

Elke's notes during the committee meetings:

• www.dropbox.com/s/bbvrtu7czrsnv79/elke.my%20notes%20from%20meetings%20with%20review%20committee.v2.pdf

New version with all the feedback from the committee included:

PDF-file: drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/ForwardUpgrade.v16.pdf
Word-file: drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/ForwardUpgrade.v16_0.docx