28 December 2010 - version 4.0 PionHbtInPP_v4.0.pdf

• Response to the Referee
• Referee report

6 April 2010 - version 3.2 PionHbtInPP_v3.2.pdf

This is the version submitted to PRC.

• The only difference from v3.2 is that STAR author list and acknowledgements are updated and Norbert Schmitz's suggestions sent to star-papers are applied.

27 March 2010 - version 3.1 PionHbtInPP_v3.1.pdf

Our responses to the comments from the Collaboration review

• Yale - Helen Caines gave me a marked-up hardcopy with several suggestions, most wording, grammar, spelling (oops!), and we have incorporated them.
• Comments from BNL
• Comments from Spencer Klein
• Comments from IOPP
• Comments from JINR
• Comments from Bedanga

7 January 2010 - version 3.0 PionHbtInPP_v3.0.pdf

This is the one sent out of the GPC to the collaboration.

• The only difference from v2.3 is that STAR author list and acknowledgements are now added.

28 December 2009 - version 2.3 PionHbtInPP_v2.3.pdf

Our responses to GPC comments to v2.2

1. comments raised over the evo meeting of 17 Dec
2. Michal Sumbera
3. Tomasz Pawlak

Finally, there were a few other changes, most related to figures, that were made in going the final step from v2.2 to v2.3, that are not in direct response to GPC comments.  These may be found here.

16 December 2009 - version 2.2 PionHbtInPP_v2.2.pdf

 Our responses to GPC comments to v2.1 from

1. Dave Underwood
2. Michal Sumbera

Small changes needed in figures.  I want to collect these small changes and then ask Zibi to implement them all at once.

1. full distinguishability in Black-and-white (Zibi took care of symbols, now we need linestyles too)
2. standardization of R_o instead of R_out or R_O labels
3. combination of figures 8 and 9 ??

30 November 2009 - version 2.1 PionHbtInPP_v2.1.pdf

Our responses to GPC comments to v2.0 from

1. Michal Sumbera
2. Dave Underwood
3. Debasish Das
   Outstanding issue on one of Debasish' issues: we will make sure that all symbols/lines are distinguishable in black-and-white format.

Updates needed for next version:

1. All figures ready for Black-and-white printing (see Debasish' comment above)
2. citations needed for lines 41 and 42.
   • "freezeout hypersurface" - therminator polish guys and Li/Ko/AMPT
   • "collectivity in initial stage" - Kolb, Sinyukov, Pratt, therminator polish guys
   • "equation of state" - frodermann/heinz/lisa, lisa/pratt/soltz/wiedemann

July 14,2009 - version 2 - PionHbtInPP_v2.pdf

Our responses to comments to v.1.2 received from:

1. Sudhir
   www.star.bnl.gov/HyperNews-star/protected/get/bulkcorr/380.html
   our response:
    www.star.bnl.gov/HyperNews-star/protected/get/bulkcorr/380/2.html
2. Evan
   www.star.bnl.gov/HyperNews-star/protected/get/bulkcorr/380/1.html
   our response:
    www.star.bnl.gov/HyperNews-star/protected/get/bulkcorr/380/1/1.html
3. Paul
   www.star.bnl.gov/HyperNews-star/protected/get/bulkcorr/355/1.html
   our response:
   www.star.bnl.gov/HyperNews-star/protected/get/bulkcorr/355/1/1.html 

July 6, 2009 - version 1.2 - PionHbtInPP_v1.2.pdf

Minor updates:

• Missing citation fixed
• error bars added to emcic fit parameters
   

June 29, 2009 - version 1.1 - PionHbtInPP_v1.1.pdf

Updates of figures: 

• Figs. 2,4,5,6 (SHD of the CF and fits for 4 kt bins) - legend updated
• Fig. 3 (mT dep of 3D HBT radii) - legend updated
• Fig. 7 (mT dep of 1D HBT radii) - legend updated
• Fig.10 (mT scaling) - Legend and caption updated
• Fig. 8, 9 (multiplicity dependence of 1D HBT radii) - Legend and x-axis title updated
• Fig. 11 (mult. scaling of HBT radii from p+p to Au+Au) - Legend and caption updated
• Fig. 12 (mult scaling of HBT radii in samll systems - world systematics) - updated
• Fig. 13 (mT dependence of 3D HBT radii in small systems - world systematics) - "preliminary" label added to NA49 results

Text updates:

• The title of section VB added - was missing in the prev draft
• Fig.9 - added comments that non-femtoscopic correlations were not included in the fit 

June 16, 2009 - version 1 - PionHbtInPP_v1.pdf