Collaboration review : comments from Institute of Particle Physics

Comments from the Institute of Particle Physics

1) Title: Femtoscopy in p+ p collisions at RHIC ->
 Femtoscopy in p+ p collisions at \sqrt_{s} = 200 GeV ?

 2) Abstract: line 1 and line 4, p+p -> $p+p$
 line1/2 at 200 GeV -> at \sqrt_{s} = 200 GeV

 3) Line 111, up to 200 GeV -> up to \sqrt_{s} = 200 GeV
 Line 112, d+Au -> $d+\mathrm{Au}$
 Line 131, in the soft sector-i.e. at low pt. ->
 in the soft sector, i.e., at low pt.

 4) Line 193, The paper is organized as follows ->
 The rest of the paper is organized as follows

 5) Line 221, $Q_{inv}$ -> $Q_{\mathrm{inv}}$, everywhere,
 $R_{inv}$ -> $R_{\mathrm{inv}}$, everywhere

 6) Line 228 and 236, “o,” “l” and “s” ->
 “$o$” “$l$” and “$s$”

 7) Line 430, 439, ... MeV/c -> $\mathrm{MeV}/c$, everywhere

 8) III Analysis details, are there any nhit, dca cuts in your 
 analysis?

 9) Line 481, GeV/c -> $\mathrm{GeV}/c$, everywhere

 10).In line 689, is it "pT-dependence" or "mT-dependence"?

 11) Line 749, 808, $Au + Au$ -> $\mathrm{Au} + \mathrm{Au}$
 Line 782, 803, 805, p+p -> $p+p$
 Line 803, A+A -> $A+A$ or $AA$

 12) Line 812, 813, why we need "-" here?

 13) Fig 1, could we make the label "q_{o, s, l} [GeV/c]" larger?  The
 label size for different Fig are different, Should we make them same ?

 14) Fig 3 and 5, $A_{22}^{RE}$ overlaped with data points.

 15) Fig 7, caption, $R_{inv}$ -> $R_{\mathrm{inv}}$. Same thing in the
 table V, VI, VII.

 16) Fig 8, try this if PAs used root,
 <dNch/deta> -> #LT dN_{ch}#/deta #GT, also, $R_{inv}$ -> 
 $R_{\mathrm{inv}}$.

 17) Fig 9, $Au+Au$, $Cu+Cu$ -> $\mathrm{Au} + \mathrm{Au}$, 
 \mathrm{Cu} + \mathrm{cu}.

 18) Fig 11, 12, <dNch/deta> -> #LT dN_{ch}#/deta #GT. same as Fig 8.

 19) Fig 14, the label for the x axis should be a little bit far away
 from the axis.

 20) reference [1] - [4], the journal information should be added.
 (Please check all references.) Actually, it seems we don't need the  arxiv
 number if the paper has been published.reference [14], why we need website here?